Post by eline on Jul 19, 2010 6:28:30 GMT -5
I decided to try to write a story too. ;D
Please tell me if I made any grammar or spelling mistakes because I tend to make those a lot,since I have to translate everything from Dutch to English.
A meeting between two former best friends
It was a nice day in more then one way.
Mushu whistled while he walked down the stone stairs of the Fa family temple.
The sun shined brightly,the birds sang and even the otherwise threatening statues seemed to smile at him.
Ever since he defeated Shan-Yu (with the help of Mulan and a little cricket),he was a true hero.
Too bad some spirits at the temple didn't acknowledge his courage and strength.
He was sure they would come around in the end,but until that time he would just have to endure the nasty pranks and mean remarks.
Suddenly mushu stopped,alarmed by the sound of a creaking gate.
Slowly he looked around the garden.
There,behind one of the Fa statues,he swore he saw the tip of a blue tail.
A very,very familliar tail.
"Ping?" the tiny dragon whispered,half disbelieving.
"Who's there?!",a voice answered,"don't come nearer,I'm armed!"
A tiny blue head with green eyes peaked behind the statue and looked at him with the same incredulous expression that must have been on Mushu's face.
"Oh,Mushu! Hey! I didn't know you where here!"Ping said,clearly uncomfortable.
Mushu just glared at his former best friend.
"Still mad about Chan Juan,I see." Ping looked at him guilty.
"Not really." ,Mushu answered,to Ping's surprise,"after 50 years you kinda get over your heartbreak."
It really had taken half a century for him to get over the beautiful lilac dragoness.
"There are no words to express how sorry I am."
"I know."
"But in my defense,she was the one who began with the flirting."
"I know." Mushu sighed.
"She told me you didn't pay enough attention to her,that you were always busy with becoming a guardian." Ping looked at Mushu,afraid he would explode any moment and send him away.
But the little red dragon remained calm
"But I still shouldn't have done it.I'm sorry,Mushu" Ping finished.
"It's okay",Mushu said,"Where is Chan Juan now?"
Ping looked at his feet "She left me for another dragon,one who was bigger and stronger."
"I already guessed that;" Mushu answered.Ping grinned at him.
"What a nasty little dragon she was.",Ping murmured,"But what a pretty one too"
Mushu couldn't help but agree.
Please tell me if I made any grammar or spelling mistakes because I tend to make those a lot,since I have to translate everything from Dutch to English.
A meeting between two former best friends
It was a nice day in more then one way.
Mushu whistled while he walked down the stone stairs of the Fa family temple.
The sun shined brightly,the birds sang and even the otherwise threatening statues seemed to smile at him.
Ever since he defeated Shan-Yu (with the help of Mulan and a little cricket),he was a true hero.
Too bad some spirits at the temple didn't acknowledge his courage and strength.
He was sure they would come around in the end,but until that time he would just have to endure the nasty pranks and mean remarks.
Suddenly mushu stopped,alarmed by the sound of a creaking gate.
Slowly he looked around the garden.
There,behind one of the Fa statues,he swore he saw the tip of a blue tail.
A very,very familliar tail.
"Ping?" the tiny dragon whispered,half disbelieving.
"Who's there?!",a voice answered,"don't come nearer,I'm armed!"
A tiny blue head with green eyes peaked behind the statue and looked at him with the same incredulous expression that must have been on Mushu's face.
"Oh,Mushu! Hey! I didn't know you where here!"Ping said,clearly uncomfortable.
Mushu just glared at his former best friend.
"Still mad about Chan Juan,I see." Ping looked at him guilty.
"Not really." ,Mushu answered,to Ping's surprise,"after 50 years you kinda get over your heartbreak."
It really had taken half a century for him to get over the beautiful lilac dragoness.
"There are no words to express how sorry I am."
"I know."
"But in my defense,she was the one who began with the flirting."
"I know." Mushu sighed.
"She told me you didn't pay enough attention to her,that you were always busy with becoming a guardian." Ping looked at Mushu,afraid he would explode any moment and send him away.
But the little red dragon remained calm
"But I still shouldn't have done it.I'm sorry,Mushu" Ping finished.
"It's okay",Mushu said,"Where is Chan Juan now?"
Ping looked at his feet "She left me for another dragon,one who was bigger and stronger."
"I already guessed that;" Mushu answered.Ping grinned at him.
"What a nasty little dragon she was.",Ping murmured,"But what a pretty one too"
Mushu couldn't help but agree.