levy120
Guardian
Muushuuuu~
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Post by levy120 on Dec 1, 2009 16:10:26 GMT -5
JBG had a lot of WIP topics scattered on other boards, interestingly not here, therefor it has a History topic with Deleted Scenes and stuff here, that is much much better However, "The night of the folorn souls" hit page 16 today with an amount of almost 8k and so I felt like... promoting xD Teasertime Aaand, because I feel like it ~ Have a Sneak Peek x3 - - - “You know,” Mushu murmured, “I’d rather have you staying here and cure yourself to-” In the next instance the dragon found himself lifted and placed upon his guarded one’s head. “See?” Deng questioned and let the dragon plop down, “I don’t even have a lump.” The guardian used the opportunity to check carefully if his protégé truly was right. While the reptile scurried around on his head and shoved parts of hair aside the soldier continued. “You just need to calm down a bit,” Deng then pointed out in a more soothing voice than Mushu had known so far from him. The dragon let out a defeated sigh. “Fine.” The soldier picked his guardian up again and put him back down to sit in his lap like a little pet. “You really are a newcomer,” Deng said, “this is not meant to be an insult, and you’re reaction to this prank proofs it.” The dragon raised a disbelieving eyebrow at his guarded one. “Think about it, Mushu. This is the training. Stuff like this happens, if it was intended or not, we ought to be prepared for it.” For a moment, Deng didn’t talk to his guardian anymore, he had kind of drifted away when he continued, absentmindedly stroking the dragon over his back, as if he was a lonesome cat. To Mushu it felt like a needless comfort, however he couldn’t help but notice that his protégé had started to quiver. “You haven’t seen a battlefield yet.” When Mushu would have normally shot out a semi-nasty response to this, he now simply glanced up at his guarded one. Remorse was mirroring in his face. “It was a prank,” he admitted, although it sounded like a lie. - - - NOW DISCUSS >
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Chester
Fuzzball
Pain in the neck
^ Pretty Face ^
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Post by Chester on Dec 8, 2009 13:02:34 GMT -5
This fanfic SUCKS because I'm not in it!
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levy120
Guardian
Muushuuuu~
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Post by levy120 on Dec 19, 2009 4:14:35 GMT -5
Alright People, have a little "deleted scene" here. Because I doub this piece will make it in the finished version.
It's a rought draft that I didn't read over much, so there's a high possiblity of typoes, grammar errors or words in the wrong context. Enjoy anyway and give me some Feedback if you think this should stay in or not.
I root for not because it isn't exactly a plot-furthering piece.
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It was their big day. They would be moving out soon. Mushu went to search Yingtao for his final goodbye, yet she was nowhere to be found. That left the dragon with a rather numb feeling in his stomach. While he was still scanning over the field for what felt like the 100th time, Deng whistled him over and the guardian followed the call obediently, disappearing in Deng’s collar.
Mushu had expected the journey to pass in utter silence, however Deng started up a conversation. “Did you say good-bye?” he asked. Mushu’s ears dropped as he contemplated his answer. “No.” The soldier raised his eyebrow at the dragon, but decided to not push the issue any further. “Why do you ask?” his guardian though questioned. The dragon was no friend of silence, especially not the heavy and ominous one that had fallen over Deng’s division after the previous day. His guarded one merely shrugged. “I tried to,” Mushu elaborated, not wanting the exchange to die down again, “I just couldn’t find her anymore.” “Who?” the soldier asked. As long as his guardian was the one to seek conversation without feeling ill about the topic, Deng decided that a little talk might do both of them rather well. “Yingtao,” Mushu answered, “The female I told you about.” “Ah-“ was all Deng answered. It was not tinted with the soldier’s usual bitterness, though it sounded as if his assumptions had been confirmed. Another rather awkward moment of silence passed before the conversation continued on the guarded one’s behalf. Mushu by now had climbed onto Deng’s helmet. “Do you have family?” it slipped out of Deng. There he’d been with his guardian for a good month already, and just now the soldier had realized that he knew nothing about Mushu. “Yes,” was the rather chipper answer to this question. The dragon kept his gaze fixed on the horizon when he had answered and then turned down to glance at his guarded one with a big grin. “I’m sitting on it.” For a moment Deng’s feet refused to carry him any further. The soldier frowned and forced himself to go on. This couldn’t have possibly been what the dragon had meant.
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levy120
Guardian
Muushuuuu~
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Post by levy120 on Dec 21, 2009 6:41:45 GMT -5
The night just escaped an almost hiatus. And it was saved by...
A bird ~
Now let your imatination run wild.
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alliriyan
Ghost
The Plotinator
I BBQ plotbunnies for breakfast ;D
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Post by alliriyan on Jan 12, 2010 15:14:39 GMT -5
FALCOOOOOON PUUUUUUNCH And now for something completely different. I loved your idea of having a tea break mid-battle if only it wasn't so horribly out of tone for the fic XD And are you gonna link the Stars drabble here or in a new topic? I commented on DevArt I liked it
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levy120
Guardian
Muushuuuu~
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Post by levy120 on Jan 12, 2010 15:47:05 GMT -5
TEA TIME %D And of COURSE is "Stars" going into this topic, since it's a new TEASER for the fic ;D If this scene gets incredibly lucky I might rework it to actually merge it into that last paragraph, but as it is now it'll be a "deleted" or in some case "missing" scene - hence the promotional Teaser Oneshot for you peeps x3 - - - Ping was gone. And the shape of the moon reminded both of them of how little time there was left until Mushu as well had to go. And she would be alone again. Yingtao glanced up at the night sky, where the lights of the universe mockingly shimmered down at her. "Moments like this," she murmured, almost unaware of it, "make me feel rather small and insignificant." "Not me," the male voice next to her protested while the dragon it belonged to kept his eyes fixed on the firmament, "They make me feel great! As though you could just reach out and grab one of them," the tiny guardian explained while he gestured, as if he actually believed what he was saying there. It put a warm smile on the dragoness's face. Right now the little one seemed so confident of himself, it appeared to her that he could truly do anything. "Whatever confronts you in this world," she silently thought to herself, "I wish for you to keep this faith." She chuckled slightly at herself for her own irrationality. "One day," she actually said out loud, "you will." levy120.deviantart.com/art/34-Stars-quot-English-quot-150177050
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Chester
Fuzzball
Pain in the neck
^ Pretty Face ^
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Post by Chester on Jan 25, 2010 13:01:40 GMT -5
Reading out, the Protocol:
Chester: Attendance clear *rubs paws* Alright, let’s begin! Welcome to this sessions “The night” special meeting. We have two newcomers among us and a little special guest waiting outside. Adult Zippo: *raises an eyebrow* You seem pretty cheerful considering it’s Mushu. Samiel: A little too chipper if you ask me *rubs his forehead* Chester: *crosses his arms and leans on them with a smug grin* Oh what do you know. Yingtao: Well I know that I’d feel a little more comfortable if you hadn’t as many guys invited here. Chester: Bah, blame that on Levy. Howlith: Yeah, speaking of which – where is she? I need to have a word with her. Chester: I think you better save this for the next time, big guy. Adult Zippo: So you just…. skip on her? Samiel: …Oh really? Adult Zippo: Is this why all the other fandoms are missing out as well? Chester: Calm down everybody, it’ll be a surprise Samiel: Calm down? No way *jumps on table and spreads out wings* NO CHAINS! You are DOOMED, little buddy! Ping: *shakes head* Yingtao: Oh dear, I guess that kid’ll get a heart-attack Ping: Who, Mushu? Yingtao: No, Levy Chester: That’s secondary, mi- ZIPPO! Hold – that – Owl – DOWN! Yingtao: *tipping fingers on the desk* Tell me, lion – is every session like this? Samiel: Not quite, sweetheart. Yingtao: *glares* I don’t recommend moving just a step further. Ping: *smacks Samiel with his tail* Samiel: My, aren’t we a little OTT, there? Adult Zippo: *crosses his arms and leans back* Because you’re one to speak. Chester: *clears throat* So well, should we let him in? Adult Zippo: Fine *goes to open the door* Mushu: *walks in with a piece of paper in hand* Chester: *sits down* Well, Mr. Canon, what do you think? Mushu: *glances from the paper to Ping and back on the paper* *grumps and sits down* No way is that right. I was born perfect! Ping: *suppresses laughter* Mushu: *raises a glary eyebrow at him* What, is that a challenge? Yingtao: *rolls eyes* Sure you go on. I don’t need this *stands up* Chester: *stands up and calmly pushes her back into the seat* Don’t jump the gun on them, just relax. *turns to Mushu and Ping* You two better settle this peacefully. Mushu: I heard that sarcasm Chester: *jerks head mockingly and walks back to his seat* Want me to ring the gong then instead? Mushu: I hate you. Chester: *shrugs* Ping: *leans back slightly* Well, what now? Mushu: *looks back at the paper* Come on, haven’t you read that yourself? You’re ridiculous. Ping: Suuure ~ Yingtao: What, are you jealous, Mushu? Mushu: Oh, don’t make me even start about you *walks up to her and circles around her like a predator* You look a little… girly, huh? Yingtao: *rolls her eyes* So…? Mushu: *stops and puts his arms akimbo* Well, what do you have achieved? Saved China or anything like that already? Yingtao: *flicks an ear* …no? Mushu: *looks back at Chester* Let me take a wild guess who’s responsible for this piece of humiliating crap! Chester: *leans forward* According to this you were young and needed the money. Mushu: What the… WHAT? *spins around to Yingtao again* You do not deserve meeeeee Yingtao: *ear twitches* *brow furrows* Alright? *stands up* Say that again, tiny! Mushu: *backs off a little* *hides behind Chester and shows him the paper* Come on, it’s clear this girl is a Mary Sue! Chester: *shoves the paper aside and pulls out a character file* According to this test she isn’t. Mushu: What is this world becoming?!? Samiel: You appear to be quite stressed. You do know that you can always come to your dear friend, Sa- Mushu: And what the hell is HE doing here? Samiel: Making it all better of course. Mushu: *sigh* *turns to Ping* My, so sorry excuse for a best friend, might you want to take care of that? Ping: *flings Samiel out of the door* Mushu: *pulls back slightly to take a better look at Ping* *nods* You might not be all too bad after all *turns back to Yingtao* You can have her Yingtao: Excuse me?! Mushu: I’m fairly proud of being the only character to leave this horrendous sequel as a single and I’d like to stick up to that, if you don’t mind. Besides, whatever happened in that fangirl’s sick mind there, it’s supposed to be past anyway, right? *pats her shoulder* Yingtao: *growls* Mushu: *flexes fingers* You know, I’d tell Levy personally, but since she’s unavailable right now ~ Yingtao: *strokes through her fur irritated* Chester: *glances down at Shito* You got that? Shito: *grump* and how I do ~ Chester: *takes the paper* And you’re not doing any sugar-coating here, right? Shito: *rips the protocol back* No, idiot. Chester: Well you can leave THAT out ~ Shito: In your dreams. Mushu: Well, was that all? Chester: I suppose, for a start. Mushu: Well fine then. Ping Pong at 5PM? Chester: Of course, I won’t let Cri-kee wait. Adult Zippo: *flinches* Man, and I thought I was the villain. Mushu: *opens door* Oh yes, one more thing, I heard she can talk to ‘Tom Bancroft’ now? Chester: Uh… apparently Mushu: Tell her that this guy still owes me money! Chester: I’ll make a note of that. Mushu: *turns back to glance into the crowd* Was it that? Alright. *waves casually and then leaves in one motion* Chester: … Adult Zippo: I miss Cri-kee now Samiel: Well, that was a little anticlimactic. Yingtao: Man, that little… and he was SUCH a nice kid! Ping: *shakes his head* He’s grown. Chester: He’s canon Ping: That too. Yingtao: So what? That doesn’t give him the right to talk to me like that! Chester: In fact it does, Cherie ~ Yingtao: *slumps back* Chester: *closes the notice-book in front of him* You know I might have a female for you next time, she’s just a little uh… silent. Yingtao: You mean I can’t handle this bunch? Ping: *clears throat* Adult Zippo: *leans forward to eye Ping* Not quite the chatter either, huh? Ping: Uh… well… Chester: Fine, I suppose this was it then. Yingtao: Wait, what? But I’m just getting started. Chester: Sorry, Missy, I’m a busy guardian. And I have a Ping-Pong tournament later this evening. Adult Zippo: Well, why did you want us *points at Samiel and himself* to be here then? Chester: *smirks* Witnesses *leaves the room*
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levy120
Guardian
Muushuuuu~
currently working on: fanfic overload and reviews
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Post by levy120 on Jan 25, 2010 15:44:24 GMT -5
You know what? Just leave it <.<
On a brighter note ~ I think I'm done. It was like... only a few sentences, can't believe I struggled so hard with them.
Phew?
In to the Beta with you now ~
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levy120
Guardian
Muushuuuu~
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Post by levy120 on Jan 29, 2010 12:42:09 GMT -5
If looks could kill Deng would be more than dead
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levy120
Guardian
Muushuuuu~
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Post by levy120 on May 24, 2010 13:56:18 GMT -5
THIS IS HOW WE BETA PEOPLE! It's FUN! [19:51] Alliriyan: a cliff doesn't have to go with water [19:52] Alliriyan: but saying little ledge makes it sound like a two feet drop or something [19:52] levy120: I'm bad at that feet stuff... [19:52] Alliriyan: not to mention I was convinced it was a windowsill until Jian fell off it and died. [19:52] Alliriyan: okay, a metre? [19:52] levy120: LULZ [19:52] Alliriyan: (3 feet to a metre) [19:52] levy120: A metre is high enough already [19:53] levy120: almost too high [19:53] Alliriyan: not to die [19:53] levy120: Well he falls unluckily [19:53] Alliriyan: hmmm [19:53] levy120: because he's in panic and can't brace the fall [19:53] Alliriyan: well it needs changing because it's not a windowsill [19:53] Alliriyan: =P [19:54] levy120: I have problems with these kind of locations in German already, it was hard enough to find a propper English word for it - but it is certainly not a cliff [19:54] levy120: I can try to scribble it up maybe [19:54] levy120: I will scribble it up for you [19:56] Alliriyan: well [19:56] Alliriyan: there's a dip called a haha that farmers used to watch sheep from [19:57] levy120: dip called a haha? [19:57] levy120: what? [19:57] Alliriyan: ok.. [19:58] Alliriyan: a dip is the opposite of a bump [19:58] Alliriyan: and haha is the word for little ledges that are next to fields for sheep. [19:58] Alliriyan: =P [19:59] Alliriyan: not many people would know it though so don't use it xD [19:59] Alliriyan: I just thought it was funny that the specific word you wanted existed [19:59] Alliriyan: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ha-ha BEHOLD~ [20:00] Alliriyan: and it's originally chinese xD [20:02] levy120: OH SHIT XD [20:03] levy120: I feel AMAZINGLY INTELLIGENT NOW [20:03] Alliriyan: HELL YES XD
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Post by bookwormgal on Jun 6, 2010 11:07:48 GMT -5
I spy a new Mulan posted story, Levy. And it looks good.
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levy120
Guardian
Muushuuuu~
currently working on: fanfic overload and reviews
Posts: 945
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Post by levy120 on Jun 7, 2010 1:23:21 GMT -5
Ha! xD It's not over yet, even though ff.net said so at first, I was in a slight rush when upping it... %D
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ckatmyla
Phantom
dishonor on your cow
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Post by ckatmyla on Jun 7, 2010 2:49:36 GMT -5
Hooray for posting! *blows noisemaker and confetti blizzard floats down everywhere* ;D Really glad you have finally started posting this one, it's the fic everyone's been anticipating, even the ones who don't know it I'm especially anticipating meeting Cherry and Ping, from all those little tidbits you've given me, this should be a great one. As for mine, it's just the one everyone wants finished already.
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levy120
Guardian
Muushuuuu~
currently working on: fanfic overload and reviews
Posts: 945
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Post by levy120 on Jun 27, 2010 17:22:41 GMT -5
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Buta
Phantom
Thread Necromancer
11/08/09, 3:00 AM: I owned the board.
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Post by Buta on Jul 7, 2010 10:45:42 GMT -5
ITT: I'm not reading the rest until it's all up. Srsly.
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